Welcome to Alevai. A few months ago, I started writing a story for the children of a friend of mine. Well, I've managed to write a grand total of 6 chapters before getting stuck.

So, I thought, maybe if I posted my chapters one by one, I could gain some insight from the comments that could send me on my merry way.

Just a note: By posting this story on the Internet, I in no way give up my rights to it, nor am I leaving it out for public domain status. This story is copyrighted by me and me alone. If you leave comments regarding it, you are relinquishing rights to your comments. So, if I use your idea, don't sue me -- you wouldn't get anything anyhow.  ¶ 10:28 AM